Community Movie

[TyR)]

Most important - the sandking scenes dont underline my name, which is, in turn, written wrong in the Credits.
Egocentric?
Who?


Ps: I like the video very much, there are several things (some mentioned already) like too long this, too soft that etc, but for a DotA-video it's really, really amazing, in my eyes.
Good job!

[Cnacnel]

OMG, it sucks because the only scene where I am, is when TyR ends my killing spree with his trap.

[J0su]

^^

[Sirian]

and my rocket/hook > movie rocket/hook =/

[J0su]

dont feel to bad had to keep it short =D but when u have better scenes like u watched, PLEASE send them to me !

reminder: yoshibo@web.de

[J0su]

Just had the idea to let the name of each player apper shortly depending on whos devoted scene it is. With an effect like a tiny glow from the left to the right through the letters.

[Sirian]

or a small; Tyr) as SK towards the end of the scene

[Spasmolyt]

Sorry, but the editing is really terrible imho.
1. The music is not synced to the action in any way.
2. The first song is so low it's almost impossible to hear there is a song playing.
3. The intro looks cool for the first 20 seconds or so, but after that I just wanted the action to start. Display the intro texts shorter or shorten in in another way please.
4. The (almost) fullscreen glow effects add nothing and make it hard, sometimes impossible, to see what's going on. After all, effects should make it clearer what the most important moves are, not mush everything in a layer of white fog so you stare at your monitor with your nose touching it, trying to find out what the action is.
5. The fullscreen white flicker adds nothing, doesn't look cool, will send some people into epileptic fits and distracts from the action too.
6. The camera work is sometimes confusing, suggesting that it's the next scene we're seeing when you just switched to a different hero. Please make the start/end of a scene clearer.

[J0su]

Sorry, but the editing is really terrible imho.
1. The music is not synced to the action in any way.
2. The first song is so low it's almost impossible to hear there is a song playing.
3. The intro looks cool for the first 20 seconds or so, but after that I just wanted the action to start. Display the intro texts shorter or shorten in in another way please.
4. The (almost) fullscreen glow effects add nothing and make it hard, sometimes impossible, to see what's going on. After all, effects should make it clearer what the most important moves are, not mush everything in a layer of white fog so you stare at your monitor with your nose touching it, trying to find out what the action is.
5. The fullscreen white flicker adds nothing, doesn't look cool, will send some people into epileptic fits and distracts from the action too.
6. The camera work is sometimes confusing, suggesting that it's the next scene we're seeing when you just switched to a different hero. Please make the start/end of a scene clearer.

1.yeah that is because I thought of replacing the music anyway (Gonna sync it then)
2.my bad renderd the video with too low audio voulme, next one comes in better resolution and higher voulme setting
3.in progress
4.done
5.lol(thought of removing it (; )
6.in progress

[Spasmolyt]

Ok, thanks for accepting the criticism.
Really looking forward to the final version. The included scenes are really good

[J0su]

nice movie! really love the graphical effects

some remarks:
1. starting music is too soft and intro is too long
2. some songs dont overlap
3. Some scenes are too vague (because they fade in from a previous scene)
4. outro is too long
5. I am not in there! (mayb im just too noob for it though) or mayb its cause most, if not all, scenes are from DR on northrend.

1.done (new music for the Intro, Intro shorter too)
2.working on it
3.working on it
4.done(great deal shorter now)

[Sirian]

and 5.?

[MeatHead]

As Sirian wrote, maybe add something like who is who. Like Hex0r does, he adds hero icon, so we know who to look at, and also name next to the icon And in credits or w/e it is, maybe make the names a bit bigger, since I cannot read 1/10 of a centimeter sized letters, and I am prolly not alone

Looking forward to the final cut ;D

[Sirian]

And in credits or w/e it is, maybe make the names a bit bigger, since I cannot read 1/10 of a centimeter sized letters, and I am prolly not alone

that would be solved by higher resolution and fullscreen video =)

[J0su]

As Sirian wrote, maybe add something like who is who. Like Hex0r does, he adds hero icon, so we know who to look at, and also name next to the icon And in credits or w/e it is, maybe make the names a bit bigger, since I cannot read 1/10 of a centimeter sized letters, and I am prolly not alone

Looking forward to the final cut ;D

Yeah nice idea with the icon will do that, I am going to add the icons and the names right now

[J0su]

Replaced the main music with Insomnia - faithless )
In more detail just the "invaders must die" song.

ADD:

what about adding more songs and shorten the other ?
Pro ? Contra?

[Sirian]

imo every long scene should have its own soundtrack, shorter scenes can share a longer song.

[Flutschi]

Nice Video!

1. About Music: dont change too often, one two songs are enough for a long video... changing too often sounds in my ears like terror

2. watch maybe, that the terrain doesnt change.. its "strange"

3. Intro max. 20 secs.. Outro 1-2 mins max... not more

4. DotaRank.. the R is big.. :P or maybe ask rogers, maybe u can call it RankedGaming or simular...

5. at the end, u need to put what u used, like programs, musics, and stuff... its a copyright thingy thing..
if u did that already, then i couldnt read it, and im sorry :P

6. i forgot, u got an option that u dont capture the mouse into the vid... enable it :P the mouse has to go away


hf with this :P
Flutschi

[J0su]

Nice Video!

1. About Music: dont change too often, one two songs are enough for a long video... changing too often sounds in my ears like terror

2. watch maybe, that the terrain doesnt change.. its "strange"

3. Intro max. 20 secs.. Outro 1-2 mins max... not more

4. DotaRank.. the R is big.. :P or maybe ask rogers, maybe u can call it RankedGaming or simular...

5. at the end, u need to put what u used, like programs, musics, and stuff... its a copyright thingy thing..
if u did that already, then i couldnt read it, and im sorry :P

6. i forgot, u got an option that u dont capture the mouse into the vid... enable it :P the mouse has to go away


hf with this :P
Flutschi

hey,

1.have 5 tracks now but they connect good
2. thinking about it
3. Intro is 30 seconds now
4. Yeah I am gonna do that when the new website is about to be done.
5. did that^^
6. I work on that

j0su

[omgomgomgg]

what is happening with this video ?